Second draft- detective intro

We revised what the detective says for the first shot he is in.

"It's been a few weeks since the victim went missing, and the case has now been handed over to me. I'm a detective, and the first thing I noticed about the case file was the door was left ajar, her backpack was left at the door, and her car was left in the driveway. So to me, she couldn't have run away. Not on her own at least."